This is supposed to be the beggining of my literature review for my thesis. Unfo

This is supposed to be the beggining of my literature review for my thesis. Unfortunately I got bad feedback from my supervisor and was asked to edit it. This was my feedback:”The point of this assignment is to write 10 pages minimum of literature review as if you are starting with intro and onwards, not to jump around from section to section. Revise and resubmit.