please use instructions and add 2 more sources including the ones on my attachment
You have already formulated a research question*, which means part of the work has been done towards forming your thesis statement. In order to write a good thesis statement, you should focus on one aspect of your topic. Your thesis statement should be specific, and you need to be able to support it with specific evidence.
There are a few strategies you can use to create your thesis statement.
Turn your research question into an assertion and give evidence and reasons for this argument.
Summarize the main idea of the essay you want to write, and turn that summary into an argument.
Use a formula to develop an initial thesis statement. For example, you can use the following formats to create an initial thesis:
Although most scholars of ________ have argued ________, further research shows________.
(Your historical topic) was a result of________, ________, and ________, rather than________, as most historians have argued.
________demonstrates that (your historical topic) was a combination of ________ and ________, contrary to the argument of ________.