I have attached my completed literature review. The following are the notes my p

I have attached my completed literature review. The following are the notes my professor made that need to be fixed prior to the final submition.
Your methods section needs work; This Methods section should be describing what YOU did. Methods you used for your literature review. We discussed this in class and you had an assignment mid-semester that reviewed Methods for a Literature Review. It should include the methods you used to identify the body of literature or sources that you have included in your review.
Many of your sentences start with Authors names, which can get repetitive. Your topic sentence for paragraphs shouldn’t begin with Authors. For example— “Castillo and colleagues (2019) indicated that there is a relationships between…” You don’t need to start with the Author’s name in the sentence. You can state their findings as fact and then simply cite the sources that support your point at the end of the sentence. This is part of synthesizing the information and not just having your paper read like an annotated bibliography. Make sure you are prioritizing using your own words, and your own language to explain your points, then cite properly. I want to see your interpretation of what the research says.
These two things will really strengthen your final draft