As you revise this essay, what are the top three areas that you need to focus on

As you revise this essay, what are the top three areas that you need to focus on as you revise? What steps or resources will you use as you revise each of these areas?
In one paragraph per area, tell us what area you plan to focus on, why you are focusing on that area, and how you will revise this in your final essay. (USLO 10.3)
Your initial response should have your informed input and should be at least 100 words. Your input should be in your own words, demonstrating your understanding and comprehension of the topic.
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